Friday, March 27, 2009

" I see Her Everywhere"


I just woke up
the light seems sort of idiosyncratic
sort of more enticing;
the trees are more green
kind of more livelier;
the air is soothing
it kind of bears this corporeal form;
And her hair are all over my face.

I m sitting in the bus;and somebody
is sitting beside me.
I m reading this book; and i can see
the words smiling at me.
I m singing this song; and i hear all
the birds singing with me.
And her eyes are like those blue waters
hiding life underneath them.

Every sound is like a music today,
the weirdest thing so amusing today.
In the crowd i see a single figure today,
or does every figure seem so similar today.
And i hear a ballad,a luminary ballad,and
a percussion,its her voice;that of an angel
taking me away from the milieu into
a sequestered territory.........


But for her visage ,i would better be blind
But for her voice ,i would better be deaf
But for her touch,i would better be benumbed
But for her ,i would better be dead.

Oh !! i just heard her laugh
and i just saw her smile
Where is she?;near me
Or is the distance a few thousand mile.


[INSPIRED FROM "I See Her Everywhere" on www.simplydevansh.blogspot.com]

5 comments:

  1. this is so so cool man. the feel you gave it... now i say here, that i sense a romance for someone :)
    seriously man... written truly from the heart.
    the para
    "But for her visage ,i would better be blind
    But for her voice ,i would better be deaf
    But for her touch,i would better be benumbed
    But for her ,i would better be dead."
    is totally fundoo. hats off for this one :)

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  2. well.. neither am i sayin' that there is a real "her" whom i see everywhere nor am i denyin' it..
    u r into writing urself n u more than know the answer to this question...
    if u can write widout "her" i can do it !!
    if u can't...neither can i !!
    thanx 4 ur appreciation nywaz

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  3. awesome poem dude!!!! seriously hats off to you.... i must say the girl is lucky!!!

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  4. u have ur answer as a seperate post dear...read on !!

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